🏚️ THE RED VALLEY ESTATE: SEVEN SOULS OF SIN (Part 4) 🏚️
PART 4: THE SURGEON’S SILENT THEATER
(The group leaves the Library, leaving Hina behind—her body frozen like a wax statue, her eyes wide but silent. They enter a hallway that smells of rusted iron and antiseptic. The walls are no longer stone; they are tiled in cracked, yellowing porcelain 🏥💉.)
Ali said: (His flashlight flickering 🏮) "Keep moving. Don't look at the jars on the shelves. Just keep your eyes on the floor."
Sara said: (Gagging at the sight of a glass jar 🤢) "Ali... there are fingers in these jars. Fresh fingers. One of them has a ring that looks exactly like mine!"
Zain said: (His camera-eyes zooming in 🎞️) "The tiles... they are moving. Every time we take a step, the room gets longer. We aren't getting closer to the end of the hall."
Bilal said: (Trembling 🤡) "Maybe we should try walking backwards? Or crawling? Anything to get out of this 'Saw' movie nightmare!"
Anam said: (Stopping in front of a heavy metal door with a small glass window 🚪) "We are here. The Infirmary. This is where the house repairs its 'broken' parts. And Hamza... you are the strongest part we have."
Hamza said: (Lifting his heavy weapon 😤) "I'm not a 'part' of anything! If some doctor comes near me, I’ll bury this wood in his chest!"
Maya said: (Her sketchbook showing a man with four arms holding surgical saws 🎨) "You can't fight him, Hamza. He is the weight of every person you ever hurt to prove your strength."
[The Operation Table]
(The door slams open by itself. Inside, a single operating table sits under a buzzing, flickering light. A man in a blood-stained leather apron stands there, his face covered by a mask made of human skin 😷🩸. He is sharpening a massive bone-saw.)
Ali said: (Trying to pull the door shut 🛡️) "IT’S LOCKED! We’re trapped in the room with him!"
Hamza said: (Charging at the Surgeon 😠) "GET BACK! I’m not afraid of you!"
(The Surgeon doesn't move. He simply raises a hand, and the heavy metal chains hanging from the ceiling fly forward, wrapping around Hamza’s arms and legs, hoisting him into the air ⛓️💥.)
Sara said: (Screaming 😱) "HAMZA! NO! ALI, DO SOMETHING!"
Zain said: (His vision blurring 📹) "The Doctor is pointing at Hamza’s chest. He’s writing something on the chalkboard."
Anam said: (Reading the board 🤫) "It says: 'The protector is a predator. Show the heart that broke the weak.'"
Ali said: (Shouting at Hamza 🗣️) "Hamza! The house wants a truth! Tell it what happened at the gym last year! The kid who ended up in the hospital!"
Hamza said: (Struggling against the chains, his face turning red 😫) "It was an accident! He shouldn't have been in my way! I was just training!"
(The Surgeon steps closer, the saw beginning to spin with a high-pitched, mechanical whine ⚙️🪚.)
Hamza said: (Screaming as the blade touches his skin 😭) "OKAY! I DID IT ON PURPOSE! I wanted to show everyone I was the best! I knew he was injured, and I hit him anyway! I liked the sound of his ribs snapping! I AM A COWARD!"
[The Scar of Truth]
(The chains suddenly drop. Hamza falls to the floor, gasping for air. The Surgeon vanishes into the shadows, leaving behind a small, silver key on the operating table. Hamza looks at his chest—there is a deep, permanent scar in the shape of a broken heart 💔🩸.)
Bilal said: (Looking at Hamza with fear 😨) "You really did that? You broke a kid’s ribs just for 'status'?"
Hamza said: (Crying on the floor 😶) "I... I hated myself for it every day. That’s why I act so tough. I’m trying to hide the monster."
Maya said: (Turning a new page ✍️) "The monster isn't hidden anymore. The house has fed on your guilt. Only four of us are left to face our trials."
Ali said: (Picking up the silver key 🗝️) "This key is for the Attic. That’s the final floor. But to get there, we have to pass through the Mirror Gallery."
Anam said: (Her eyes turning completely black 🌑) "The mirrors don't show the past, Ali. They show the future. And Bilal... you won't like what you see."
Bilal said: (His voice cracking 🤡) "Can we skip the mirrors? I already know I’m handsome! Let's just go to the roof and jump off! It’s safer!"
Ali said: (Leading the way 🛡️) "Stay close. If you see yourself in a mirror doing something bad... do not look away. If you look away, you stay in the mirror forever."
(They walk toward the staircase leading to the highest point of the house. The sound of thousands of mirrors cracking at once echoes from above 🪞💥.)
TO BE CONTINUED IN PART 5...